Examples of Ways to Simplify Consent Form Language

INSTEAD OF THIS I am conducting an investigation regarding peer relationships.
SAY THIS

I am studying how children work and play with each other.

INSTEAD OF THIS The purpose of this study is to compare the physiological responses of CAD patients at intensities based on perceived exertion while exercising on the elliptical crosstrainer and the treadmill.
SAY THIS

We want to find out if patients with heart problems can benefit more from exercising on a special walking machine than from exercising on a treadmill.

INSTEAD OF THIS Your decision to withdraw will not adversely affect your status at the Clinic or University.
SAY THIS Your decision to withdraw will not upset us and will not affect your regular care at the Clinic or anything you do at the University.